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因为人名都是音译（比如叶修Ye Xiu），所以没什么好吐槽的，至于角色名亮点就比较多了（按书中出现顺序先后更新，楼主一边看一边更）

Ye Qiu didn’t turn his head as if he had been waiting for this moment, merely asking: “Arrived?”
“Arrived.” Su Mucheng also replied simply.
“Then let’s go!” Ye Qiu once again declined his opponent’s request for a duel. He gently removed the card from Glory’s dedicated log-in device. He headed to the door and grabbed a jacket from a clothes hanger on his way out.
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荣耀Glory，这个翻译没有太大亮点，中规中矩，也比较原汁原味。给好评～

The night had already darkened considerably, but Club Excellent Era’s lights were still bright. Ye Qiu and Su Mucheng walked out of a room and walked all the way to the end of the corridor. Located here was a spacious conference room; at the entrance, digital display screens almost completely covered the walls. They showed the rankings of the “Glory Professional Alliance” and a few skill statistics.
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嘉世 Excellent Era，意思是非凡的时代，比较有原文的味道，给好评！
荣耀职业联盟 Glory Professional Alliance，这个就不说了，中规中矩。

“Ye Qiu, the club has already decided that the transfer member Sun Xiang will take over your position as captain. From now on, Sun Xiang will be in control of your account One Autumn Leaf.” Club Manager saw the arrival of Ye Qiu and immediately turned his head to speak. Without saying it in advance or conveying it tactfully, he heartlessly notified him in an ice-cold manner as if he were throwing away a ball of already-used toilet paper.
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一叶之秋 One Autumn Leaf，意为一片秋天的叶子，虽然和原文的意思有略微不一样，但意境上比较相似，毕竟英文和中文的语言风格就相差很多。还是给好评吧！

This was the focus that everyone payed attention to at this moment — Sun Xiang, Glory Professional Alliance generation’s genius level player. In the league last season, Sun Xiang won the Most Outstanding Rookie title with his MVP-like stats and led the mediocre Team Conquering Clouds to eighth place. His advance to the playoffs was hopeful, but midway, he transferred to the collapsing Excellent Era Club. Although Excellent Era’s accomplishments were terrible, they possessed a player who was regarded as a Battle God in Glory: Battle Mage One Autumn Leaf.
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越云战队 Team Conquering Clouds，意为征服云彩。这只小队各位印象可深刻？嘿嘿嘿～
斗神 Battle God，意为战斗之神。嗯，还是那么酷！

“Do you like this game?” Ye Qiu suddenly asked looking straight at Sun Xiang.
“What?” Sun Xiang startled.
“If you like it, then treat everything as glory and not boasting.”
经典的场景↑

Without saying too much, Ye Qiu said a total of eight words: “I’ll rest a year and then come back.”
休息一年，然后回来！

Chen Guo’s Internet Cafe was called “Happy Internet Club”, considered a fairly high-class Internet Cafe.
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Happy Internet Club 兴欣网络会所。看到这里时楼主是崩溃的！！！！冠军之队啊！！！王者之师啊！！！虽然中文名本来就没啥内涵，但你翻译成英文好歹也高大上点啊！！！Happy这么个连小学生都会拼写的单词也太不走心了吧！！！Happy你头啊！！！
然而，
楼主转念一想，
译者可能是想和剧情里兴欣从名字不被看好到逆袭夺冠的情节吻合，所以取了个同样不被看好的英文名。
译者真是良苦用心啊！
然后，
依然不觉得这个名字翻译得多好。

The popularity of the other nine servers hadn’t dropped much because of the opening of the tenth server. The older the server the more this was true. This was because starting in Glory with a new account wasn’t easy. Chen Guo had played on Chasing Haze for five years until it was considered a fairly good account by ordinary standards. How could it be abandoned so easily? What’s more, later, everyone would try to rush to the cross-server Heavenly Domain.
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Heavenly Domain 神之领域

“I know. Of course I know. Let me tell you a secret. Actually, I’m Ye Qiu.” Ye Xiu said.
“Really? Then let me tell you a secret too. Actually, I’m Su MuCheng.” Chen Guo said.
“I really am Ye Qiu.” Ye Xiu cried.
“I really am Su MuCheng.” Chen Guo said.
“I… …”
虽然以前看了好几遍但我还是不争气地笑了

In this situation, even the experts were helpless. Aside, Chen Guo was actually overjoyed with a face of “I knew it would be like this”. She looked at Ye Xiu and recorded his username: Lord Grim.
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看到兴欣的译名后，我不由得开始担心译者会怎么翻译君莫笑——按照兴欣的风格，君莫笑难倒会被翻译成Do Not Laugh？
事实证明——
译者的水平大部分时间还是在线的。Lord Grim，冷酷君王，嗯还是蛮符合君莫笑的气质的。毕竟中文名是 出自唐代诗人王翰的《凉州词》
葡萄美酒夜光杯，欲饮琵琶马上催。
醉卧沙场君莫笑，古来征战几人回。
英文不可能原汁原味翻译出中文的味道，但意境符合就比较令人舒服。给译者点赞！

First was Sky Strike, a Battle Mage skill. Every class had this type of knock-up skill. Their characteristics were all the same. After attacking, the target would be knocked up. The higher the skill level, the higher they would knocked up and the greater the damage. This was a commonly used skill. Ye Xiu had originally been a Battle Mage, so he chose the Battle Mage skill Sky Strike.
After that, Dragon Tooth, another Battle Mage skill. It was a direct attack that would cause the enemy to be stunned. Ye Xiu also easily learned it because of his original class.
He then learned the Sharpshooter skill Floating Bullet, the Mechanic skill Machine Trace, the Spellblade skill Wave Splitting Sword, the Grappler skill Backdrop, the Ninja skill Shuriken, the Blade Master skill Guard, the Elementalist skill Electric Ring, and the Priest skill Heal.
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Battle Mage战斗法师
Sharpshooter神枪手
Mechanic机械师
Spellblade魔剑士
Grappler柔道
Ninja忍者
Blade Master剑客
Elementalist元素法师
Priest牧师
Sky Strike天击
Dragon Tooth龙牙
Floating Bullet浮空弹
Machine Trace机械追踪
Wave Splitting Sword地裂波动剑
Backdrop背摔
Shuriken手里剑
Guard格挡
Electric Ring光电环
Heal治疗术